Oblivious - Unaware Story Game - Submit ideas!

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Hey there everybody,

I've been wanting to do something on this DeviantArt page that was a little more involving than simply posting updates on comics, the occasional poll, and even less occasional status update. I wanted to make something like a game (may not be the best term for what I have in mind, but bear with me), something fun to do on here. And I think I finally got an idea. While I was going through some old files on my computer, I happened upon an old script for a Giantess Fan comic that I never finished. It was titled, "Oblivious", and (get ready for a shocker) it was an unaware themed comic. It was going to be one of my more "Less Than Serious" works: the premise followed a blonde freelance reporter named "Lorraine Delaine" who has a curse that causes her to grow in size randomly for a brief period of time. However, each time the curse takes affect, it is marked by a sudden onset of drowsiness, always causing Lorraine to yawn very deeply when it happens. This causes her to not really notice that she's growing and the sort of joke of the comic is that each time she grows it's in a situation that allows her to completely misinterpret what's actually happening. For example, the first issue was to follow Lorraine doing a story on a art show, where one of the attendants submitted a large model city. You can probably guess what happened next.

I never went anywhere with the idea on Giantess Fan because I felt it was too light hearted and that it didn't really have a point. Plus, it was challenging to come up with different scenarios of Lorraine growing and then misinterpreting them. At the time, I actually considered asking people if they'd help me. And, well, that's basically the point of the game I'm proposing now.

Throughout the month of February, I want you guys to submit ideas for a scenario for our oblivious reporter to grow in size. It can either be publicly in the comments or in Notes. At the end of the month, I'll put some into a poll and you guys can then vote on which scenario sounds best to you. Then, next month, I'll write a four part series of that scenario each Friday. During that, you guys can then submit new ideas for the next month's scenario.

Here's some rules:
1. No Nudity - I'm sorry but nudity is usually a turn off for me (I know, point and laugh if you must). But, in addition, if Lorraine's clothes ripped as she grew that would make it hard for her to remain properly oblivious.

2. Remember's Lorraine's position - Lorraine is a reporter, so any scenario needs to have her working on some kind of news story. The news story then in some way has to contribute to Lorraine's misunderstanding when she grows.

3. Be brief - You don't have to go crazy when submitting a scenario. It doesn't have to be an essay. Just try to clearly say what the scenario is. For example, using the scenario I gave earlier: "Lorraine is doing a report on an art show and one of the attendants has made a model city". That's very concise and it's all I need to make a story. If you feel you need to include more details, then by all means do so, but just don't go overboard.

4. Please only scenario per user - Please don't spam. Very carefully consider what you submit. If you come up with something better, edit your original post.

5. No planetary sized growing - I think that one's pretty self explanatory.

6. No scenarios involving scat, piss, or any of that stuff.

Now, some of you might be thinking, "What does Lorraine look like?". Well, actually, most of you already know. You may remember a post in which I introduced a woman named Lorraine for an upcoming comic series "From The Stars". When I abandoned "Oblivious", I used the Lorraine character for "From the Stars" (which was originally written almost three years ago). The Lorraine in "From the Stars" is not a reporter, but she shares the same basic appearance. Here's a link in case you forgot what she looks like. The only real difference is that Lorraine Delaine from "Oblivious" wore white pants instead of a dress, much like this.

I know this might seem like a very cheesy idea, but I was hoping to get more involved with the viewers of this page. That, and I have written a giantess story that wasn't a comic for quite some time. It would be fun!

I hope to hear some responses! :)

KevinFred

  
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She was doing a report on a city model building competition, but then she interviews a person with a strange device that supposedly "instantly creates life-like cities out of nowhere." Stuff happens and the reporter is now gigantic, and unaware that the tiny city is real. :D (I would write a hair related synopsis, but can't think of one right now :D )